Sunday, December 28, 2014

-late Freight- Comments

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'Oh no, I'll be late! ' you thought
so, you raced through the rain
'till you were low on gas, alas
you had to make a rushed pit-stop
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Nika McGuin
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Daniel Brick 08 January 2015

This is a clever and tightly wound-up poem of EVERYDAY LIFE. The odds are against you, not the big odds, but a lot of small ones. But despite frustrations you pull through with the surprise of being early. The situation was not AS BAD as you thought. That's the message of the poem. It's a precisely detailed slice of life. And very energetically written!

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