The first warm day,
and by mid-afternoon
the snow is no more
than a washing
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A poem so nicely crafted with the sweetest choice of words. Thanks for the sharing.
Beautiful style of spilling your thoughts. Liked it. Thanks for sharing.
Ted, such a fine poem of the day... big congrats and a full 10+++++
The scene set superbly.A story then told to keep my attention. Brilliant. Thank you.
The style of the narration is superb and playful. Enjoyed the portrays of late february. Thanks for sharing.
Last night, I switched on my fan, the first warm night, the fan whispered, be relieved of cold now sleep early to get up early and to pay thanks to the Lord who gives a few days of of pleasure to everyone including the sinners like me. In the morning, a pleasant morning, I read this poem, a pleasant poem.
Very nice. Loved the way you played with the words while painting the picture.
You paint such vivid pictures. What a finely crafted poem. I will look forward to reading more of your words and work. Thoroughly enjoyed. PEACE
Winter is bleak over there, much softer here on the North East Coast of Australia; the Police aren't going to come knocking when the dead farmer is found, surely not Ted?