Wednesday, September 20, 2006

Late Evening In The Village Comments

Rating: 3.7

As night falls, the bats do flit
From the old belfry tower
A barn owl silently ghosts
Across the flowery meadow
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Kanniappan Kanniappan 18 October 2015

Very nice and real scene shown in the poem.

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Susan Williams 18 October 2015

Absolutely luscious - places the reader there in the village and right there on the country lane and in the woods where the owls hoot

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 October 2015

Nice work with the acts of nature.

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Seema Jayaraman 18 October 2015

Nice poem... Perfect description of a rural farm setting

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Nimal Dunuhinga 21 September 2006

Brilliant Marilyn! I stuck in your village of Twilight and I hear the bell tolls in the old belfry hall...........you painted the late evening on all of our hearts.

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Patrick Ladbrooke 21 September 2006

Real atmosphere. If only... life could be this idyll all the time. Great poem, as Sandra says, enchanting. Patrick

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Scarlett Treat 20 September 2006

Everything that I have ever dreamed about the English countryside, you put into your work, and it is truly beautifully done. I look forward to each and every one.

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Sandra Fowler 20 September 2006

This poem is pure enchantment. Praise for the lovely word picture you have painted. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Sylvia Spencer 20 September 2006

Marilyn This poem is just so full of life, what a wonderful place to be just to see all this wildlife. I really did enjoy this poem thanks for sharing your love of nature with us all Cheers Sylvie

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