Late Dream Comments
Bird was flying lavishly, un-cared, unheard
Over the dale, over the field; with no shield
Enjoying the freedom, Singing, dreaming,
Thinking: “Ah! So beautiful is the dream of a bird”
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note Khairul Ahsan's comment below. May he rest in sleep while we still enjoy his poetry
Boy, seeing the bird tried to fulfilled his dream.. One small pebbles that he took and hit the bird, - - - - - - - the action and the reaction can haunt a little boy for a long long time
My heart is wrenched, thinking that this is the last poem you posted on this site. You fell unconscious on your way back home from work, on the same day you posted this poem, and never regained your consciousness. May Allah SWT rest your soul in peace and grant you Jannah! The poem seems ominous, on hindsight.
A nice poetic imagination, Aftab. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
Aftab can read your poems no more. This is the last poem he wrote/posted on this site. He fell sick on the same day he posted this, while returning from work and died in a hospital later. May God rest his soul in peace!
Dreams are needed in life! Guarding the yield. Nice piece of work.
Wow nice imagery! U wrote it in a dreamy poetic style. I like bird poems. Great to read u again. Thumbs up.
Truly, we don't know when our dreams would be shattered.
Very nice presentation about Dream. Best word play, deep speculation. Many thanks.......10
Ah! Dream fallen on ground circling, cursing to fate, Boy enjoyed with dream that was dead-late dream Oh, what a beautiful poetic creation! . Thank you poet Aftab Alam.
Why do some people enjoy putting others down? nice poem bro...
One dream fulfilled another shattered by the same event. Beautifully tackled in the poem. Thank you.
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Dream fallen on ground... wonderful expression.