Monday, August 27, 2012

' [ Late August ] ' Comments

Rating: 4.1

Heat still sizzles in the fields
In August summer still yields
The sun shines to no regret
Wind sauntering 'til sunset
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Rachel Butler 16 August 2015

Season tale, good write. RAB

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Yash Shinde 21 October 2012

excellent imagery...........read your poems for the first time but loved them.......

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 September 2012

Kudos 4 d superb seasonal n month imagery. Enjoyd d pretty rhyme scheme.

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Elna Nel 27 August 2012

Well done, good description, and the first strophe is excellent.

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