Friday, June 7, 2013

Lastnight Too Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the moon came down
with its faded light,
darkness about to depart
with no sign of wonder.
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Neela Nath Das
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Heather Wilkins 19 June 2013

beautifully expressed poem. Will the knocking ever stop?

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Vipins Puthooran 12 June 2013

I'm not far from the door of my heart/// so poetical! ! ! An excellent poem

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Neela Nath Das 10 June 2013

My dear friends thanks a lot for kind comments.Spirit, I'm not professional poet.But I love to scribble like this.

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Farah Ilyas 09 June 2013

MAy be it would be fear instead of any knock, about the conflict which going on in ur mind continuously intentionally or unintentionally...well as far poem is concern it sounds great & scary

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Valerie Dohren 09 June 2013

Intriguing poem - scary. Well written as always.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 09 June 2013

Superb poem man, really enjoyed it. Siya_! !

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R.j. Wynn 08 June 2013

10+++++. great poem. you must open it. Enjoy life scared to death. Wooooooooooooo!

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Lyn Paul 08 June 2013

Oh dear... too scary. I would be getting the ghost whisperer in. Hope you get a good night sleep to night,

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Valsa George 08 June 2013

If I hear such a knock and knows that it is repeated every night, I won't be able to sleep and I am certain to develop insomnia! A scary experience! !

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