Saturday, October 27, 2012

Lasting Losses Comments

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Life
Lets nothing last.
Leaving souls to live
Like chalk drawings
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M. Bloom
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Amanda Laurent 27 October 2012

I love this poem! You've made it so easy to envision these chalk drawings being washed out, and it's a perfect metaphor for life and its end, as inevitable as the rain. Thanks for sharing :)

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