Tuesday, February 3, 2009

Last Year Comments

Rating: 3.5

It is the final step
and we turn off the lights
It is the longest road
Then we`ll begin our fights
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Valao Kole
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Valora Krown 03 February 2009

Thanks, Jon. I like it myself though i don`t think it`s the best i can write. I feel more like writing prose. I`m trying to write a book right now...

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~ Jon London ~ 03 February 2009

I loved the flow of this piece, the step into the unknown....The road can be full of pot-holes..but even if we do keep our eyes open, we'll be sure to stumble and fall along the way..but we dust ourselves down..and continue the walk hopefully we'll find the destination they call happiness in the end. Keep expressing Jon

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