Monday, July 2, 2012

Last Words Comments

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May these be my last words;
I am tired of telling my tales,
You know not what grows inside;
A storm of dread and deadly gales
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Shouvik Roy
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Captain Cur 04 July 2012

Wow! What a poem. Don't make these your last words. Keep sharing. Great work.

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Urshula Davis 04 July 2012

I got a bit emotional reading this! lol Nicceeeee WELL DONE! !

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Darkangel Flyfree 02 July 2012

May these be my last words...I like it, very deep and emotional! Another great poem! ! !

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Kasia Fedyk 02 July 2012

Wow Shouvik, very deep, very sensual and majestic. Another incredible write! I love it!

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 02 July 2012

The words so struck the feel into my mind; tired of telling tales that taint my thoughts pale... Very well done, Roy! The poem is a good conductor [of emotion]...

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Neela Nath Das 02 July 2012

Oh! Very sentimental.I love the earnest words.Love itself is associated with deep sentiment.Liked this piece.

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Unwritten Soul 02 July 2012

Another nice write, the emotion displayed in every inch of lines...keep it up Shouvik_Unwritten Soul

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Theo Williams 02 July 2012

Very well written poem Shouvik! Made lovely reading and I like how you started and ended! Very well done. Williams, T.

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