Last Waltz Comments

Oh My God! you just took my breath away. This was unexpected being that it is only your first poem. I thought I would be nice and read some of the new beginners poem and welcome them on board. But you my friend, seem to me to be an expert. I had a happy dream last night and found it still smiling on my pillowcase this morning This was the hook for me. I felt like I was with you in your dream. Beautiful writing. Thank you for sharing