Tuesday, March 20, 2018

Last Two Minutes Comments

Rating: 5.0

J-ump ball has begun,
C-ompeting teams starts scoring,
C-oaches yell or shout.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 March 2018

A fascinating acrostic haiku. I could feel tension among the audience and basketball teams. Great piece.10

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Shakil Shmed 20 March 2018

nice thought, well penned haiku, thanks for sharing

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

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