Sunday, October 7, 2007

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she speeds home to apologize;
she didn't mean what she said.
tears welling up in her eyes,
she clutches the note to her chest.
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Poison 9901 07 October 2007

Such a sad and tragic ending. This is why we should always choose our words wisely, you never know when you may not be able to make amends. This is such a beautiful write about true love, and the tragidies that can change it all in a flash. 'Again, very nice write' 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison.

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Jimi Doyle 07 October 2007

wow! sad story...but i like it

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