Sunday, February 18, 2007

Last Train Comments

Rating: 5.0

Last Train

There was one rode in, and one rode out,
below sodium trickles, of Saturday doubt,
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Mary Naylor 18 February 2007

You captured this reader from beginning to end. Haloed around the strong, rhythmical beat and the excellent use of rhyme, the flames of tragedy flare. Bravo!

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Jerry Pike

Jerry Pike

Harrow, London, England
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