Tuesday, March 8, 2005

Last Thoughts Comments

Rating: 4.5

Go to bed and never wake up
breathe your last breath
cry your last tears
remember the good times
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Cynthia Sok
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Gregory Gunn 18 January 2006

Dear Cynthia, In my humblest of opinions this is definitely your bravest effort of the ones I have read thus far. It demonstrates wisdom beyond your years. I wasn't doing this edgier stuff until much later in life. Especially loved the 'ransack your mind' line. A very shiny 9 from me. Gregory

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