Last Talk Comments

very touching and natural poem frend. voted10 surya

i appreciate your gesture...but very rare do men speak as openly as women do...it's not that they don't care. it's just that they aren't expressive in matters as this.

There needs to be alot of editing and grammar corrections. My other website the one I put my poems on would yell at you for such bad grammar.

I have my reasons When we see each other It be silence and quiet for a moment I'm hoping for this too happen This way for me to deal with this I feel like I need to know...............it can't belast talk. it is begining of thenew talk and each time we meet it is with fresh begining and promises... onemust hope things to happen inreal way and hope best for it... really it should happen in lie...loely write phan.....10 read mine anywhere....butterflies around......mary to marry...

Aww a last talk =[ This was like the person was rushing just to have that last talk.....beautiful poem =] -Ellie