Last Supper Comments

From those and in those blue beautiful eyes salty water dwells and this creates an amazing scene. A brilliant poem is wisely penned.10

A clever little jewel this poem is. Nothing like a tiny murderballad to brighten up the day.

Scary chilling and just a little bit clever! Succint and it works perfectly! HG: -) xx

lol did she say, tenderly composed POC? rofl I was gonna say, you Irish are such brutes with the funniest sense of humour! rofl Yes it is clever, Love the title and the salt was perfect for her wound! rofl grinning at you, Tai

This is SO clever... and tenderly composed. t x

my heart filled with exasperation..........so sad to leave someone you worshipped? what a beautiful write frank.appreciated.

I always check religious references (Last Supper) ! You can imagine my surprise. Well done.

'Hi! ', That was a wonderful little 6 lined poem. It is definately the best I have read that captivated you from the beginning to end. It was imdeed a sad poem. But you constructed it well. WELL DONE! Cheers :)

A promise is........indeed.........a promise!

Oh Oh....no good can come from bringing a 45 to the dinner table! ! : -) Hugs, Dee

Witty, tightly written, not a spare word there - you manage to tell a huge story in so few lines. Excellent. Keep on!

Your writing is amazing... only thing I ask of you is to keep going Kat

A very meaningful write. I love it. Ron