Wednesday, January 11, 2012

Last Sunset… 1101-2012 Comments

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Mornings come and mornings go.
Ceaseless winds timeless blow.
As kismet rolls its enduring gall.
Another domino tumbles falls.
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Sun Shine 31 August 2012

SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL! Sunshine

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Julian Mann 06 July 2012

Great poem, as I read I felt suspended somewhere above all the comings and going of Earthly things.

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Khadija Gourri 04 June 2012

VERY GOOD Description

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Basma Amir 04 May 2012

Nice poem! ! Amazing title! ! ..

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Rizvana Parveen 23 January 2012

Good composition......

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Unwritten Soul 11 January 2012

Sunset comes sunset go, after morning go it comes, after sunset go morning comes..in between just a mid, midnight or noon...lonely o lonely it's not you feel lonely but heart felt to be something to attach only :) ..Like a coconut tree, it stand solely without branches, maybe it lonely without branches but hey around it a lot of coconut trees, why dont you be in one orchard...(But not mean you in Hawaii) hahahaha_Unwritten Soul

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