Tuesday, May 3, 2016

Last Spring Comments

Rating: 5.0

I took this photo when our love was still in bloom,
But how fast the breeze carries seasons,
how fast the sky changes the faces of the moon,
Sultry summer kisses to ardent winter spoons
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Dr Antony Theodore 04 May 2016

I saw love swept me off in a swoon Just One afternoon, I have just fallen out of love so soon. love in swing and in full bloom. and love lost... frustration, suffering and pain. we go through lot of experiences in our lives...... that is life and that is the mystery in our lives. tony

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 May 2016

Touching memories of break-up with the loved one narrated with articulation in this short verse with rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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