Thursday, September 3, 2015

Last September Comments

Rating: 4.8

Gone are the rays, of summery days
soon castles fade to breaking waves.
Solar and lunar ply shine and rain,
to wallow in splendor, and weep in pain.
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Jaxsun Castro Horn
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Chinedu Dike 08 September 2015

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. A lovely poem written in heightened diction with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Jaxsun. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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David Wood 03 September 2015

Alas, a flame longs an aqueous queen. Midnight and noon thrones coalesce unseen. Arcadia exalts their ecliptic surrender, lest Seraphim weep their last September. Lovely use of language in this delightful poem. I love it......10

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Jaxsun Castro Horn

Jaxsun Castro Horn

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