Tuesday, May 12, 2009

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My heart is broken
It cannot be undone

I still love you
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Aiden Florence
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Lilly Mandrell 12 May 2009

I like it. The cuplets work grate. Its really really good. I like the part about the scars on your heart. Thats so relatable. Good Job.: ]

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