Last Prayer Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Last Prayer

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sins are many
as stars of sky
as sand of shore

but I know for sure
Your Gate of Mercy
is much bigger, wider

I pray to You
as I was told to be
slowly, humbly, quietly

if You refuse me
who might be
bless me

if good persons
who can pray to You
to whom bad ones beg

I have nothing
just a last prayer
to ask for Your shelter

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Ravi A)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonya Florentino 14 May 2009

a prayer from the heart....

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Subroto Chatterjee 14 May 2009

Very nice and humble...but why 'last' prayer? Pray on...write on.. Chers. Subroto

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Subbaraman N V 15 May 2009

We pray, pray, pray to the last for the world! Let us go on!

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 15 May 2009

Dear Siddiqui, This time I think all the poems, you asked for my comments so graciously., are dedications to some great poets in PH. amongst them definitely it's difficult to live without Irish blessings of Madam Marie Shine. You have excelled when you say, ' 'if you refuse me who might be bless me if good persons who can pray to you to whom bad ones beg' This is a unique line of dedication. I agree with you. full marks --Rajkumar

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Ravi A 15 May 2009

More of your poems show a tendency of emotional surrender to others. This need not be so. We can show our respect but we need not emotionally surrender. This is my view. People are praise worthy but we need not get emotionally bound by the situation. Let us pray for the entire clan of our poets. That is enough.

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Sandra Martyres 17 May 2009

Nice sincere prayer, but we need to remember that God is all Merciful and listens to everyone's prayer

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Mohammed Albalushi 16 May 2009

Allah is more compassionate on us then our mothers whoo birth us, lovely poem dear

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Ruerd Visser 15 May 2009

Sins are many but they evaporate in the presence of the divine. One holy touch with His heart is enough to set you free, al he asks in return is that you in turn free others of their sins. Angelgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

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Alf Hutchison 15 May 2009

Prayer always reminds me of 'I am the way the truth and the life'...who are we if we have no God to pray to... fine penning Alf

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Luwi Habte 15 May 2009

good prayer...nice poet too

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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