Thursday, July 28, 2011

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I can write the saddest lines tonight.

‘The night is fractured and they shiver, blue, those stars, in the distance’
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James Trevey
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Unwritten Soul 18 February 2012

six feet under, how deep it makes me felt so much in this poem....maybe it's true you wrote the saddest line that night...but six feet above i feel you will rise with your moving heart even at this time, so hard...so heartfelt so pack with emotion...such a nice explosion here, may you will catch a light later...to find a way back to home again! ! keep writing_Unwritten Soul

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