Thursday, March 19, 2009

Last Of The Night Comments

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I saw the white light of dawn caressed the vestal night,
Rivulets of light passed painfully through the naked night,
for it clings to the true sky,
Evidence hidden among the stars somewhere,
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gina layog
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Tango 25 April 2009

You draw a vivid picteure of the coming dawn, well done. Tango.

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Ratnakar Rout 02 April 2009

Hi! gina; Short but beautiful poem.Very nicely penned down the picture of the dawn.The images are given perfectly though you claim as a novice in this field.If time permits you, please try my stuf.

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