Saturday, September 20, 2014

Last Night Was Looking In My Eyes Comments

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Valentin SAVIN
(my translations)

Below is a short biography of Marina Tsvetaeva and my translation of one of her poems.
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Valentin Savin 10 February 2019

Bri, I appreciate your joke. Osip Mandelstam was not Maria’s husband. Tsvetaeva met Sergei Efron and married him in 1912. Most of their time they lived in the Crimea. After the 1917 Revolution, Efron joined the White Army. In 1939 he was arrested. Marina who lived abroad returned to Moscow to reunite with her husband. What is wrong with it?

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Bri Edwards 09 February 2019

(cont.) 2 - her life sounds somewhat tragic! though suicide can be a quick and sure relief for some, i do caution people to get counseling AND to not 'mess it up' if they try it! btw: Osip Mandelstam (1891-1938) was a Russian Jewish poet and essayist. bri (

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Bri Edwards 09 February 2019

1 - Val, i accidentally saw this as poem of the day today; i 'never' look for these! now to read it (the English version only!) . re Marina's bio: After the 1917 Revolution, Efron joined the White Army, and Marina returned to Moscow to reunite with her husband. it sounds like she had 2 husbands! (cont.)

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Valentin Savin 10 February 2019

Bri, I appreciate your joke. Osip Mandelstam was not Maria’s husband. Tsvetaeva met Sergei Efron and married him in 1912. Most of their time they lived in the Crimea. After the 1917 Revolution, Efron joined the White Army. In 1939 he was arrested. Marina who lived abroad (in Paris) returned to Moscow to reunite with her husband. What is wrong with it?

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James Mclain 09 February 2019

Your efforts have produced a wonderful write, congratulations on this your poem of the day.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 February 2019

A powerful and poignant write. A beautiful translation. Thank.you for this wonderful offering. Congratulations!

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Valentin Savin 10 February 2019

Thank you very much for the comment.

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Valentin Savin 10 February 2019

Thank you very much, dear Rose Marie. I'm flattered by your nice comment. It's my pleasure.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 09 February 2019

Where love recedes, there comes the death. A touching acccount as well as the marvelous translation of the verse. Congrats on poem of the Day.

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valentin savin 09 February 2019

Thank you, dear Ratnakar, it's my pleasure.

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Tom Allport 09 February 2019

A very sorrowful write of desperate times in the poet's life.......translated well Valentin.

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valentin savin 09 February 2019

Thank you very much, Tom! I am more than happy.

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 February 2019

To her - the tears are water and blood In water - washed with tears! pathetic. sad to read and trying to understand the situation . the poem goes deep into my heart. thank u dear Savin for the translation. tony

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valentin savin 09 February 2019

Thanks, Dr.Tony I tried my best.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 February 2019

A well crafted poem of the day. Congrats, Valentin for being chosen...10+++

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valentin savin 09 February 2019

Thank you, dear Bernard for your appreciation of my translation.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 January 2019

Ships sail away beloved ones! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valentin Savin 29 January 2019

Thank you, Edward!

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