Monday, May 31, 2010

Last Night Together Comments

Rating: 5.0

You wore a coat I had seldom seen, maybe twice,
But now it's like a white certainty in my mind.
We stood by that sleek and silver tram and suddenly,
On that night, it had all the frightening potential of a bullet,
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Way Lenn
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Malaya Roses 04 June 2010

the truth is the only real solid substance in human emotion and mind can divert very far away from the truth. separation with hopes to meet again sometimes will drive a man into deeper and deeper love with unrealistic expectation but IN LOVE EVERYTHING IS ACCEPTABLE AND REAL. nice twist of painful goodbye.

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A truly beautiful way to express a final parting and leaving. Some good lines and the magic of tales of alternatives to help survive the pain.10+

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Jessica Kissner 03 June 2010

Thats a beautiful Poem. Very touching. I relate to it a lot.

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