Sunday, November 19, 2006

Last Night She Dreamed A Crumpled Little Cloud Comments

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She sleeps while sunrise slowly closes in
While somewhere near a rooster starts to crow
Last night she dreamed a crumpled little cloud
Where I can’t go
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Ben Partenay
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Sandra Fowler 19 November 2006

What an original title! Praise for your nostalgic poem. Kind regards, Sandra

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Prasanna Kumari 19 November 2006

a very lovely poem...i enjoyed this very much finding the quiet dreaming girl and the crumpled cloud...very beautiful as a beautiful dream.

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