Sunday, October 16, 2011

Last Night Part 7, Final Part Comments

Rating: 5.0

i've been thinking
in grief's silent darkness in my mind
i realized i'm sinking
and there aren't any lifelines to find.
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Romeo Della Valle 28 October 2011

Amazing! Sad but powerful! A well penned and full of great imagery and fine texture. It is a very sad stage of your life that soon will be forgotten or become something laughable! Once you successfully can bury your past and move on, then you will become like me: 'I am no longer crying for the one gone but I am crying for the one that is coming my way and shall be better' (In the Pursuit of Happiness) ...10+++ Well deserved! Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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