Tuesday, August 27, 2019

Last Night I Was In Sleepy-Dreamy Comments

Rating: 5.0

last night
I went to the silent alone home
of my master
 
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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C F 03 September 2019

I agree with Aniruddha Pathak, this piece is very esoteric, but through the foggy iamges that you write, one can glimpse, here and there, deep truth.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 September 2019

Thank uuuu for being the first to comment on my 2 poems just posted MB OF BD

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 August 2019

Looks a great piece indeed, yet, too esoteric for me

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 August 2019

Naked sky at night! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 August 2019

O there I found you in mirror chill my maiden, my celibate beauty my youthful fresh-blown lily o there I found your lotus-petaled eyes penciled eyebrows highs chiseled nose, swan-like neck, clammy lips passion do as master says CHURN IT IN THE WELL

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