Last night I dreamt of you
The sky was white and blue
Flapping your wings you flew
Towards me shining with love
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I really like this poem! It has such a nice visual effect to it...great job!
Hello Sylvia, Your poem had a dream like flow to it. This line, 'Hence you get a promtion' stumped me though. Life imo, is what dreams are made of, just have to follow them and life shapes whatever you want it to. Simple philosophy and in small steps, it works for me. 8 from me. All the best Tai
love draws on always on neverending perfect hope deep hope keep up the good work