Last Night Comments
She gets up in the afternoon
After she slept in the morning
Checks herself in the mirror,
lips quiver as a tear starts to well
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A good start with a nice poem, Psyked. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
a very nice and enjoyable poem it draws one to an understanding of what is happening on the backdrop of what has happened.
Thank you very much for your understanding! I am fairly new to writing and I struggle to show any of them to my family and friends. I am glad that someone can get something out of it - Psyked
Thank you very much Susan! This really encourages me to pursue my writing - Psyked
Extremely fine writing- I saw this woman and her desperate loneliness. That's poetic power packed into your pen. 10+++++++++++
if you liked this one, my poem 'Jack' is particularly close to me. Even a quick read and any criticism is helpful as well! Thank you - Psyked
Well articulated and nicely penned with insight. A sad story of frustration and emptiness written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing, Psyked.
Thank you Chinedu - I must admit that it does take a fair bit of courage to post and it makes me happy to know that someone has read it and decipher its message - Psyked
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7/29/2025 3:28:48 AM # 1.0.0
thanKs for the share do read MOMS SMILES IF FOR POET ME YOU CARE