' Last Night Comments

Sweet dreams.........................!

L, fantastic flow, rhyme and rhythm in a humorous yet bittersweet piece that leaves that slight sadness mixed with smiles... t x

I love the beginning stanza and your ending stanza, Linda.It fitted to a T in this great piece of yours.This is beautiful

Again another poem filled with life..I mean true it is about a dream. But I loved the manner in which you brought your dream to life.Your opening stanza is very arresting. Kept the reader interested through out. And in a way a very amusing poem too.. t.c lv shan

Linda, our dreams often go that way it is sad to say. Mine were always reaching for the unattainable. Top marks for this lovely poem and thanks for sharing it with us my friend. Hugs David

Dream on Linda they can come true 10 Daniel