Tuesday, September 22, 2020

Last Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

Last night

My denial to your whims
Ignited the brutality
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Aarzoo Mehek
COMMENTS
Nabakishore Dash 26 November 2021

The entire poem expresses brutality of men upon women mainly due to sheer lack of mutual understanding.Really a shocking event.superb

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 November 2020

Very poignant issue of domestic violence and male chauvinism, discussion of which is taboo in our culture, is depicted with profound sincerity and touching openness in the poem. Something only Aarzoo can do. Great poem.

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The brutality is vividly pictured. Deserves top marks

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Rajnish Manga 22 September 2020

Your poem brings the reader face to face with a situation that undermines the status of women in the society, erodes traditional familial values and promotes or legitimizes domestic violence and cruelty against women. A small poem that spurs in-depth interpretation. Thanks.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 22 September 2020

Good poem. " Pleasure pain darkness light"

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 September 2020

A very delicate and sensitive write! Highly expressive...Top score!

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Khairul Ahsan 22 September 2020

Even if the body bears the brutality, flowers of poetry keep blooming in mind- what a beauty! Full marks,5/5!

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 September 2020

last night gave birth the venomous teeth to bite the rising dawn! ! ! !

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Varsha M 22 September 2020

Often things go misunderstood without communication in a relationship. Both suffering but no one understanding. And the scars on my body Mirrors the entire story.... A story is best understood when author expressed rest all are speculations all present.

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M Asim Nehal 22 September 2020

Very sad, lack of understanding and restricted communication is the source of such things, though whims are whims..Nice poem 10 Stars

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