Last Night Comments

wow beautiful poetic expression- I offer my heart From my body torn apart My final immolation

Great emotions were put in to this piece of work. All the best

Vivid and evocative. Don't we all have such nights when emptiness surrounds us and some memory suddenly fills all the voids. Beautifully conceived n penned. Powerful emotions illustrated by striking imagery.

Your eyes appear Holding back a tear Bearing no indignation And my soul gently escapes.. a beautiful poem, imagination, fineness positive notes. very nice poem dear poet. tony

A good start with a nice poem, Nadeem. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

There is always hope in life. A great poem.

Well conceived and nicely penned with clarity of thought and mind. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing Nadeem.