Thursday, April 16, 2009

Last Moments Of My Life. Comments

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Tears in my eyes,
I lay alone on my death bed.
My ears and eyes,
Eagerly waiting for my love ones,
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Y Sunita Devi
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yes, it is a lovely write.. scary topic; but lovely write.

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Sebastine Humaemo 16 April 2009

ahhh God....a lovely write.....while reading the lines can feel the pain of tht soul, cryin to see the loved ones bfre death rules.........am sure this wll be n the mind of all, who s at their last stage n life...a great write winnie.....100+++++ plsnt n lively asusual....sebastine

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