Wednesday, August 17, 2011

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We did everything to have ever thought it could end this way
How stupid of me to have thought everything was okay

Everything couples in love do
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Claudia Nkhata
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Saadat Tahir 08 June 2012

a novel arrangement of lines there....started of with well rhymed couplets and then on into loosely woven lines of threes and fours... The memory I still hold dearly I recall the look in your eyes at the airport clearly this i liked a lot.. i guess loads of people could identify with it.....i defineitely do cheers :) ...

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Claudia Nkhata

Claudia Nkhata

Lusaka, Zambia
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