Friday, December 7, 2007

Last Look Comments

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That last look
At the life they took
Don’t even try
This is goodbye
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Olivia Anne
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Hannah Mcgill 10 December 2007

This is an amazing poem. Your use of metaphors is really good and it really sets an image in your head. This is one of the best poems i've read. keep writing!

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