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i bow to you for the style used to convey this touching feeling. shan

poet never held up in a forge for writes Here are those desires, Silenced forever, Born helpless and dead, here this poet write beyond it

Beautifully sad and deep write, Seema. Cannot say much....

beautiful sorrow, sorrowful beauty! ! encompassed love word by word verse by verse! 10+

Loss of your beloved who has departed and now among the among the death. A sad poem.

read it again and again... it was as if i have written these lines, , lastlines...thanx 'congested graveyard', , , omg

a very deep sad poem....10