Wednesday, May 4, 2005

Last Line Comments

Rating: 2.9

I am the last
line of her poem

her last poem
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Bhartendu Second
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Joseph Harskamp 26 September 2006

hm...intresting. my main complaint is that theres no meat to this. you have a good idea here, this is just a skeleton of a poem. add some substance to it.

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Nasra Al Adawi 30 May 2005

Another amazing poem that had touched me so much...keep up writing

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