Sunday, October 19, 2014

Last Leaf Comments

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Last leaf is hidding herself
amongst the wood which are naked and bare
the autumn has snatched her all company
the company which was making joys together
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ramesh rai
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Valsa George 05 November 2014

The comparison of the last leaf clinging to the branch of a tree to that of a virgin unwilling to leave her parental home is really beautiful! Yes, Autumn blasts come and shake off all yellowing leaves! Enjoyed the poem! Thanks for your great comment on my poem Winged Words!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 October 2014

To live as the last leaf is so painful with all the close associates gone. Pretty virgin wanted to leave but had no choice I think. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 October 2014

like the pretty virgin does not want to leave her father's house. Beautiful, lovely lines.

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