Sunday, October 16, 2011

Last Laugh Comments

Rating: 5.0

His laugh echoing in the small dark room, Mocking her
he circles her, his eyes fiendish
She watches as his expressions turn from anger into amusement
the amusement which drives into her like a burning sword
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COMMENTS
Lenore Lee 28 November 2011

Hmmm, I enjoyed this poem but it was missing... something. I guess I expected the ending to go out with more of a bang.

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Gretchen Colour 27 October 2011

I love the suspence in this poem. Very creative

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 16 October 2011

very very very good i love it

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