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Sandra Amanda Hamlin Only me? Perhaps less conflicts would occur if those labelers of aloofers practiced what they preached-And how about that notion of accountability? -The reality seems far worse-rather scary are those who play doctor on t.v. and never do get into any self evaluations-No mirrors huh? Meanwhile some only me's actually seek help or works with health care specialists -Reality is so heavy - What lies ahead in both knowledge and self empowerment-When a doc's a quack shoot him or her 25 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

story Brain Boy51 minutes ago the build up was interesting Comment +1 Interesting subject.

Ron Kyker44 minutes ago First, reviewing is not something I like to do. Please take my critique and use it as you see fit. It is your work and I respect all works as the child you have born. Parts of this are very good, but the lack of any rhyming scheme makes it a difficult read. With a little tweaking, this could be a very good piece. The subject is very interesting to me. You obviously have skill in your writing. Just choose a pattern and stick with it. It will add to the readability of it. You could go freeverse. I like the way you write, just find a pattern you like and it will help the flow and make for a very good read. Keep writing. This is a subject I've never seen in a poem. Good choice. Comment +1 GOOD POEM

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Doctor was on visit to mental asylum ward Mentally retarded patients were enjoying with words Some one was singing and some were crying Each one had his own drum for beating