Last Kiss Comments
JUST another down time to sleep
and dream about beatifull rainbows,
and a kiss from a old lover wearing
some ones eles gold, or a vision in
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Hi David, Now you sound like me. Sorry it was really sad your poem. I hope you find what your looking for. It is difficult to meet people today. Everyone is married or going out with someone. You wrote with sorrow, good imagery and form, but really sad. Take care.
A last kiss, yes the energy sapped, a feeling of being washed up on the beach, I hope that some bright spark picks you up again This is profound, it really hits the spot Well done again David Love duncan X
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8/27/2025 6:08:04 AM # 1.0.0
Love broken, good imagery.