Last Kiss Comments

First of all any love in a life time is a valid love and fortunately love itself does not leave our side. That is to say, as it is in the way of beauty, as life continues our love capacity also grows and matures in deph, But we do not preceive this in our early years, henceforth almost unbearable pains... But it is also a growing...remember how leg bones would ache as they grew... I am writing this as a grandpa would, but I value your writing about it deeply, for it gave me feelings and that is part of poetry's beauty. It only gets better........ Jim Troy And your poem is your open soul sharing...... I love it.....Thanks for sharing

very touching and feely nice lines cheers