Saturday, March 31, 2007

Last Hour Before Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

If life was lived
Would hearts tear tattered sleeve?
If life was loved
Would I kill to be free?
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Preeti - is here! 10 April 2007

This is just wonderful! Very lovey-dovey and a perfect penning!

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The provoking pen of a Romantic, I see. Top notch. t x

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Marci Made 01 April 2007

Wow~~~~~~~~~powerful thoughts in here~~~'we may walk in our sleep wide awake as we dream'~~~~'the ghosts that we keep'~~~~just two lines that stick to me~~~~~~~~~~~this should be a song to listen to over and over and let it all sink in. simply beautiful descriptions............mm.

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Wes Thompson

Wes Thompson

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