Thursday, December 20, 2007

Last Gypsy Church Of Buddha, Indiana Comments

Rating: 4.7

Tears falling from a weeping willow,
virgins ascending through the clouds.
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David Kowalczyk
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Mark Mywords 04 January 2008

The ending is perfect. Absolutely perfect. In fact, it rescues an otherwise somewhat mediocre poem.

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Justin Case 04 January 2008

I liked it up until the last line. Just a tad too cute, a trifle too clever, for its own good.

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David Kowalczyk

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