Tears falling from a weeping willow, virgins ascending through the clouds. ... Read full text
The ending is perfect. Absolutely perfect. In fact, it rescues an otherwise somewhat mediocre poem.
I liked it up until the last line. Just a tad too cute, a trifle too clever, for its own good.
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8/7/2025 7:19:04 PM # 1.0.0
The ending is perfect. Absolutely perfect. In fact, it rescues an otherwise somewhat mediocre poem.