Sunday, January 27, 2008

Last Grasp Comments

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At last, he's turned the final corner
Of the blur, that was his life.

He peaked at such an early age
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Alto Lee Thomas, Jr.
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Carissa Mcbride 29 May 2008

wow! ! ! this poem is great! ! keep writing

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Mary Gordley 28 January 2008

Well man's rules yes are often broken, but Life's rules likely can't. One of them certainly being that we inevitably must move along. Thought provoking poem thank you.

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Alto Lee Thomas, Jr.

Alto Lee Thomas, Jr.

Jacksonville, Florida
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