Wednesday, July 20, 2016

Last Goodbye Comments

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She smiled at him, a tired tender smile.
Knowing the end is near,
and suffering drawing to a close.
Yet unwilling to leave him,
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Kwai Chee Low
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Cigeng Zhang 20 July 2016

Your poem is very touching. It's a deep tribute to her.

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Kwai Chee Low 20 July 2016

Thank you, Cigeng. I am trying a poem without rhyme.

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Loke Kok Yee 20 July 2016

A poem written from the heart, Sad and haunting when a loved one departs thanks Chee Low

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Kwai Chee Low 20 July 2016

Thank you K.Yee. It is indeed a deep grief when a loved one departs but it is something that all of us as humans, have to face, when the time comes. That's why life has its sorrows yet also much joy, and poets have so much to write on life.

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