She smiled at him, a tired tender smile.
Knowing the end is near,
and suffering drawing to a close.
Yet unwilling to leave him,
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A poem written from the heart, Sad and haunting when a loved one departs thanks Chee Low
Thank you K.Yee. It is indeed a deep grief when a loved one departs but it is something that all of us as humans, have to face, when the time comes. That's why life has its sorrows yet also much joy, and poets have so much to write on life.
Your poem is very touching. It's a deep tribute to her.
Thank you, Cigeng. I am trying a poem without rhyme.