Tuesday, February 2, 2016

Last Goodbye Comments

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It's hard to wave your hand
When it's busy to wipe the tears
It's hard to walk away from you
When running to you is the right choice
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Jingga Hartono
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Dr Antony Theodore 17 February 2016

Please don't go Please say it is a nightmare Please wake me up Be ready for an unexpected goodbye.... life and its mysteries, complications of a love and a relationship. all that is portrayed here. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Jingga Hartono 17 February 2016

Thank you for reading my poem.. Keep reading and keep making poem Mr. Tony.. Happy reading! !

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Ernest Makuakua 06 February 2016

beautiful poem emotional It's hard to say a goodbye When this heart keep shouting stay with me I need to accept That when you start a hello Be ready for an unexpected goodbye like these lines sometimes you need to let go of what you have to receive whats best and yes it will hurt at first but the sooner we accept the better understanding of what we may have been loosing focusing on what s not there beautiful

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Jingga Hartono 06 February 2016

thank you

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Jingga Hartono 06 February 2016

thank you Mr. Makuakua.. I do like those lines.. really need to be ready for everythings that happen in our life.. thank you for reading.. keep giving me the comments, keep reading and making poems too..

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Soul Watcher 02 February 2016

Be ready for an unexpected goodbye most of them come suddenly. Well done Jingga.

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Jingga Hartono 06 February 2016

thank you I do like those words..

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Gajanan Mishra 02 February 2016

unexpected good bye, good one, thanks..

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Jingga Hartono 06 February 2016

thank you Mr. Mishra for reading and give the positive comment.

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