Last Gleamps Of Life Comments

We are born to float down the river of life, until the day comes when we arrive to the undiscovered country. A richly symbolic work, should be shared with more people, poetry that changes lifes perceptions.

A whole world hangs on the bridge of life. Great allegory, my friend

Nicely written allegorical poem..

'Bygone dream'! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

The penultimate line expresses the ultimate reality! A beautiful poem...10

The deck in front of the big ball of fire! I love this poem. Metaphysical and Filled with the Seasons and a sense of alchemy- water/fire/air.