Last Gleamps Of Life Poem by Prabir Gayen

Last Gleamps Of Life

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Last gleams of dream

Standing on the bridge of life,
Peculiar and strange is the deck,
In front the big ball of fire; bright,
The Sun is above the line: glittering,
Dim is the Vision and light is clod,
It is felt from inner state, shivering cold,
Cold fire from brunt life, ashes blur vision,
The bridge of life is broken and death gleams,
The Sun is the light to departing voyage,
Cold and quivering flicker on bygone dream.

Last Gleamps Of Life
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julia Luber 13 March 2019

The deck in front of the big ball of fire! I love this poem. Metaphysical and Filled with the Seasons and a sense of alchemy- water/fire/air.

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Kevin Patrick 21 March 2019

We are born to float down the river of life, until the day comes when we arrive to the undiscovered country. A richly symbolic work, should be shared with more people, poetry that changes lifes perceptions.

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Jankovic Zoran 14 March 2019

A whole world hangs on the bridge of life. Great allegory, my friend

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Srijita Mondal 14 March 2019

Nicely written allegorical poem..

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 March 2019

'Bygone dream'! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 March 2019

The penultimate line expresses the ultimate reality! A beautiful poem...10

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